domingo, 9 de diciembre de 2012

MY LAST HOLIDAYS


 Last summer, I went to Dènia (Alacant).

We left at one bungalow, we rented that, for one week. That have a pool.
I went to the pool everyday, that was so funny!
For some days, fellow worker of my dad, came to the bungalow for pass some days too.

We visited the castle of Dènia, it was had good views.
The third day, we went to walk up the mountain, we wanted to go to the top of the mounain but, the friend of my dad came, so we returned to the bungalow.

In front of us bungalow, were an Enlish family, and I met their son, he was handsome!, and I spoke a lot of him, but we don't changed e-mails... so I don't know more about them.

We bought some souvenirs.

There were my last holidays~.

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  1. Correction:
    left at one bungalow-- we stayed at one...
    rented that, for...--- rented that for (no comma)
    That have a pool--- That had ... (past )
    fellow worker --- a workmate
    fellow worker of my dad, --- my dad's workmate (no comma)
    for pass some days --- to stay some days
    it was had good views--- it had good...
    the friend of my dad came--- my dad's friend arrived
    in front of us bungalow --- in front of our bungalow
    were an Enlish family--- there was an English...
    a lot of him --- a lot to him

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